求助:地板数据科学家,美籍华人,英语爱好者,这句话怎么写?

  • c
    chingjx
    Considering that a large number of buildings are located at the boundaries of the blocks, we set up a 250-meter buffer zone along the boundary of each block, and buildings in the buffer zones are also counted as belonging to the chosen blocks.

    怎么改,红色的指代不明,
  • c
    chingjx
    我是认真的请教。
  • s
    stlendor
    floor data scientist
  • C
    CNV
    我直接copy的DeepL输出。
  • s
    soshy


    在蓝圈里面的黑色房子都属于Block B
  • c
    chingjx
    一楼就是我论文里表述的,但是我觉得有点指代不明,怎么表达才能指代明确呢
  • c
    chingjx
    之前就是用的those,人家说指代不明,但是实在找不到怎么表述。
  • g
    guxu
    在A和B内放置炸弹吗?
  • g
    georgeliu_007
    公摊面积,虽然是空出来的空地,但是也要计算在里面 iOS fly ~
  • f
    fcoldrain
    Considering the large number of buildings located at the boundaries of the blocks, a 250-meter buffer zone is defined along block boundaries, so that the blocks are extended to include nearby buildings that lie within the buffer zones. iOS fly ~
  • i
    ipoon
    and the buildings in each buffer zone are also counted as belonging to its surrounded block?
  • s
    soshy
    and buildings in the buffer zones are also counted as belonging to the chosen blocks.

    这样行不行:
    and these buildings are also counted as belonging to the block inside each buffer zone.

    or

    and these buildings are also counted as belonging to the block on which's buffer zone it is located.
  • l
    lingcheung
    最后改成nearby blocks,这样就行了 Send from VAIO ~
  • f
    freelsen
    我觉得问题在于blocks的单复数,你既想描述所有blocks的设置,又想描述具体一个block的设置,但是却把他们混杂在一起了。明确分开论述较好。

    buffer zones也有类似问题。
  • 似水
    一个定语从句就解决问题
    and buildings in the buffer zone(此处删除“s”) are also counted as belonging to the block which is enclosed/surrounded by such buffer zone


    或者干脆连这个定语从句也不要了: chosen blocks 变成 buffer zone enclosed/surrounded block



    或更精简: chosen blocks 变成 enclosed/surrounded block
  • s
    soshy
    surrounded这个词好,把红线部分换成surrounded block应该就可以了。
  • 9
    94crazy
    没有更多上下文信息,简介/合同/法规/广告指代的具体程度都不一样 最简单的直接替换成替换成central block不行吗? 另外buildings in the buffer zones改成单数表达会不会好一点
  • 7
    77880099
    proximal

    immediate

    close to

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