Ever since ten years ago, there have been ongoing disputes over which phone perfect.

Android or iPhone?with the increasing concerns about the question, people are calling for scholar can give the answer for this question.


我写作那里不对，求指点

一看就是模板，再说用的也不恰当，哪个手机好用为啥要问scholars?

练习下模板

there have been ongoing 是不是有点太啰嗦了？ iOS fly ~

凑字数

这个语法 我完全懵逼

people are calling for scholar can give iOS fly ~

还有这个：there have been ongoing disputes over which phone perfect.

回复7#googoofox
是的 都懵逼
感觉是翻译软件翻译的 完全不符合语感
iOS fly ~

第一句语法有问题吧 iOS fly ~

跟我当时练习四级作文一个水平
虽然现在水平还不如四级