号称台湾会考零分作文.....

In 9.21 earthquake, i and my girlfriend are together. We are on the bed, doing love. I am up, and she is down.

So we are up and down...... together.

The earthquake is more and more big, and we are more and more excited.
Though my girlfriend says no, no...... I know her heart say yes, yes...... At last, we are into high 潮 together. That day, we are the happiest a day.

I hope the last time is fast a little come.

--End--

posted by wap


这文笔给0分太正常了

通篇的语法错误 make love都没写对
我要他英语老师我会气得fuck his petitamie

台湾921大地震几几年来着

不管怎么说，我还是看懂他想表达的意思了，而且很生动呀:D

看懂了.

第一次看这文章的时候我不知道几岁

高潮 orgasm

有什么，欧美人肯定能看懂，将自己国家语言语法结构用英语表达出来的人有很多